Sunday 18 December 2011

Reader Forum created

Fiction Press offers a Forum and I decided to create a Readers Forum, so you my readers can freely discuss , critique and comment. Without the limitations of the regular Comment page.

The link is here:  http://www.fictionpress.com/myforums/Vanessa_Ravencroft/539273/

Reader Forum created

Fiction Press offers a Forum and I decided to create a Readers Forum, so you my readers can freely discuss , critique and comment. Without the limitations of the regular Comment page.

The link is here:  http://www.fictionpress.com/myforums/Vanessa_Ravencroft/539273/

New Chapter

New Chapter posted on Fiction Press
VR

Wednesday 14 December 2011

Writing and Galactic Chronicles Stories in 2012

Dear Friends and dear readers of the Galactic Chronicles stories I post on Fiction Press,

a reader today send me a message asking:



yes I plan to finish this and all my stories. I am currently completing Book X. There are only a few chapters left. Then I post the chapters to Book XI that will finish the Olafson story arch. Then I will rewrite and complete the story of Roy Masters. (I think I should be done by March.
 Sorry for the wait. I am not a professional writer and must work and so I can only post 1-2 chapters a week. But I will finish it, I promisse. Thank you for reading and thank you for commenting and caring enough to write and ask.
 In the mean time I hope you might find my other stories entertaining enough to pass the time till then...;-) I also would like to point you to my Wiki with lots of Info (It is still growing but has a few pages on Green Hell etc)

With this I want to wish you Happy Holidays and a Happy New Year and I hope I will be able to retain you as a reader and entertain you as well.
Yours truly

VR

Wednesday 7 December 2011

This is a different chapter than the last one that was up. .

a99515 writes:
This is a different chapter than the last one that was up. both of them are great chapters that need to be included in this book as now there are two good reasons to fix this mess up world.
 
VR answers:
I originally posted a different Chapter 15 to Book X of the Galactic Chronicles (you can read the deleted chapter here: http://galnet.wikia.com/wiki/Alternative/_Deleted_Chapter_13_(Of_GC_X) )
 
The reaso I took this one down is, because one of my dear friends, fans and readers said it was too confusing. After reading it, I had to agree and wanted to rewrite it.
But then my external Hard Drive, the one I keep all my Story material on, crashed for unknown reasons.
I had t send it in to : http://www.salvagedata.com/  who did a great job..but it took them almost 4 weeks to get it done. They recovered almost 80% of the files.
But in that time I was so angry at the world that I didn't find the peace of mind to write and then I wrote a new Chapter 15.
It turned out quite different to the one I had posted originally, but I still going to use the deleted oen and will recycle some of it in one of the upcoming chapters)
 
Just in case you wondered
 
VR
 

Involuntary Break

I am sorry friends; sorry for the long break. But my external hard drive with all my story files crashed and I had to send it to a specialist company to recover the files.
It took them almost 4 weeks and it cost me nearly 900 Dollars, but they recovered 80% of the files and that was worth it. I have opened an account with Iron Mountain and uploaded all my files there.

So I am back now and you can expect regular updates again.


VR

Wednesday 6 April 2011

Encyclopedia Galactica Test

14th of July 4994




Mr. Walters mentions this date
and asked what happened 500 years earlier. On the 14th of July 4494 the Third
Intergalactic War begun.        (GC:5)






154 Old Clans    




Number of Clans left on
Nilfeheim claiming direct kinship to the first Settler families. Belonging to
an Old Clan is considered a special honor and carries weight in decisions made
by Elders and Neo Vikings.                (GC:5)






200 Immortals  




Number of Terrans selected by
the Guardian to guide Human Kind to the stars. Among these are : Richard Stahl,
Obrock Mc Elligott, Dr.Isah, Cherubim, Rex Schwartz, Adam the First, Melissa
Mendosa, Yoko Tatsuma and others  (GC:1)






200,000 years of
exclusive female government                




Time of unchallenged exclusive
female government of the Saresii            (GC:6)






2099-2110           




This was a time period of
unrestricted Bio Genetic Research.      (GC:6)






2121, Year of the
Gene Clone Attack     




A large group of genetic super
soldiers attacked the Terran Assembly at Antarctica.         (GC:6)






2122 ,   




Year Clone Wars ended                 (GC:6)






2160, January 5th            




Day the Star Ark Stockholm lands
on Nilfeheim  (GC:5)






2160,




 Year Nilfeheim was settled         (GC:5)






2200




Nilfeheim starts piracy   (GC:5)



2210,




 Saturnians join the Union (GC:6)






2220,




 Year United Stars of the Galaxy was founded   This
is the year Sarans, Pan Sarans and Terrans declare to be united as the United
Stars of the Galaxy           (GC:2)






2390




 Year Nilfeheim becomes Union Member             Nilfeheim becomes Union Member       (GC:5)






2500 kilos,




 weight a Saturnian can lift           (GC:6)






2D view screens              




Technology of View screens that
use two dimensions. All Main Viewers are two dimensional but capable of showing
depth                (GC:6)






3100,




Year       Purple Throat Shiss join the Union           (GC:4)






32 Purple throat
Colonies           




Number of former Shiss Colonies,
that joined the Union. (3100). Today there are many more Shiss planets in the
Union but all are referred to as “The 32 Colonies”. (GC:4)






3200,




Year Guayas becomes  Union Member  Planet
/ Colony Guayas becomes  Union Member            (GC:6)






33rd Colony       




The Purple Throat Shiss Colony
that was destroyed and obliterated by Shiss Space Ships. The 33rd Colony is a
holy ground and memorial to the 32 Colonies. Visited once a year by millions of
Shiss for the 33rd Memorial Day and visited year round Shiss Pilgrims. (Other
Union Species are welcome to partake but are required to wear mourning cloaks
and act respectful.                (GC:4)






33rd Memorial Day        




See 33rd Colony               (GC:4)






34 Million Saturnians    




estimated number of Saturnians
currently living                (GC:6)






350 first families             




Number of Families arriving on
Nilfeheim in 2160. Clans on Nilfeheim able to trace their heritage to the 350
original families are the so called Old Clans and have considerable social
status   (GC5)






38 special           




The .38 Smith & Wesson
Special (commonly .38 Special, .38 Spl, or .38 Spc, pronounced "thirty-eight
special") is a rimmed, centerfire cartridge designed by Smith &
Wesson. It is most commonly used in revolvers, although some semi-automatic
pistols and carbines also use this round.                (GC:1)






4494,    




Year Outbreak of the Third
Intergalactic War. Kermac Thrall Species attack Union Planets. The
Assassination of Union President Holga Nosbush occurs at the 14th July of that
Year and is considered the trigger moment. Note: the Third Intergalactic war
follows immideatly after the Y’All invasion/war and is sometimes called the 4th
War by those sources and Scholars who count the Y’All war as a separate
Historic event.    (GC:3)






450 meters        




Maximum depth a Neo Viking can
dive  (GC:5)






4998,




Union  Citizens vote on Public Capital Punishment            Public Executions are voted in by a
vast majority of Union Citizens (87%) 4998 is also the year the Execution
Channel on GalNet starts broadcasting               (GC:6)






4th Inter Galactic
War  




Same as the third Galactic War.
Called the 4th by those who count the Y’All Invasion as a separate event               (GC:3)






50 cal revolver




The Smith & Wesson Model 500
is a five-shot, double-action revolver produced by Smith & Wesson, firing
the .500 S&W Magnum cartridge.It is built on S&W's largest frame, the
X-Frame. The manufacturer claims it is the "most powerful production
revolver in the world today".[2] The Pfeifer Zeliska .600 Nitro Express
revolver is more powerful but it is not a "production" revolver. The
Model 500 can fire a bullet weighing 350 gr ( 22.7 g; 0.8 oz) at 1975 feet per
second (602 m/s) generating a muzzle energy of over 3,030 foot-pounds force
(4.1 kJ).      (GC:1)






500 clans             




Number of Clans currently
existing on Nilfeheim. Old and New Clans      (GC:5)






5348




Year Erica chances to become a
Narth    Freya chances to become a Narth
(Erica Olafson)              (GC:5)






56th century     




Alternative Time Line , Future
from which Wulf Starr arrives        (GC:1)






7.62 x 51 mm     




The 7.62x51mm  is a rifle cartridge developed in the 1950s
as a standard for small arms among NATO countries. When loaded with a bullet
design that expands, tumbles, or fragments in tissue, this cartridge is capable
of delivering good terminal performance, including remote wounding effects
known as hydrostatic shock.                (GC:1)






700 model          




X101 Model Series. First to be
truly individuals   (GC:6)






712 series,         




X101 Model Series. First with
Gender appearance            (GC:6)






719 Series          




First X101 Series that was able
to sleep  (GC:6)






794 series           




First X101 Series that dreams.
Cirruit is a 794 Series          (GC:6)






8 ton energy shielded
Armor suit            




This is how much an old
Quasimodo Battle Suit weights ( Up to Mark XXVIII)



               


95 kilos under one
Gee                




this is how much a X101 794
Series weights under Standard Gravitation  (GC:6)






A the Mighty    




Furze Commander of a Space Fleet
encountered by Captain Olafson       (GC:10)






A. Vogt and Isher -




Weapon Merchants and Gun Smiths       Gun and Weapon Store in Dusk – Capitol
City of Planet Twilight. A. Vogt is saved by Eric Olafson. Gun Store/ weapon
store is robbed by the Defenders of Gore while Eric is there    (GC:6)






Aaron Mendel 




One of the Immortals - Is the
first Immortal killed by Kermac Assassins Aaron was the Business and Trade
specialist                (GC:3)






abduction stories
          




Stories of people abducted by
Aliens. Popular urban myth in the 20th and 21st century. Some of which turned
out to be true as the Freons abducted Humans for experiments.  (GC:1)






ability to receive
and interpret reflected photons          




this is how Non Corps process
visual information              (GC:6)






Absolut Vodka 




Alcoholic Spirit. Liquor brand
from Terra                (GC:1)






Academy            




While there are many Academies
in the Galaxy. When someone refers to “The Academy” they usually mean the
United Stars of the Galaxy Space Naval Academy, headquartered at Arsenal II  (GC:5)






Academy
Administration            




Department of the Academy. Where
the day to day operations, the personnel and all aspects of academy business is
managed. Both Military and civilian personnel work at the Academy
Administration.       (GC:6)






Academy
administration building
          




Sugar Cone shaped 790 meter tall
building on Arsenal II. Houses the United Stars of the Galaxy Space Naval
Academy Administration. (GC:6)






Academy Applicant       




Individual applying at the
Academy to become a Union fleet Officer        (GC:6)






Academy Application   




Process of Tests and evaluations
to determine if an individual is suited to become a Union Fleet Officer (GC:6)








Academy Aspirant          


Individual that passed the Pre
Entry Test on Arsenal Gate             (GC:6)






Academy career              




1: An Officer choosing to be an
Academy instructor goes the Academy Route/ has an Academy Career. 2 :The time
and progress of a Cadet during Academy training      (GC:6)






Academy Dome entrance
          




Arsenal II, Academy Dome: Area
underneath the Dome Rim with Air locks to the outside and Connection tunnel to
the Space landing field.         (GC:6)






Academy pranks             




Pranks made by Cadets at the
academy. Strictly prohibited, but not very hard enforced as it is an old
tradition.   (GC:6)






Academy Pre entry
test               




Series of tests and evaluations
designed to test the willingness of an Applicant. Intelligence and Security
Clearance procedures designed to eliminate agents and members of foreign and
hostile societies and tests to the psychological and physical unfit. These
tests are done on Arsenal gate to ensure no Agents of foreign nations are able
to gain access to the actual Arsenal System. Tests include Psionic and Neo
Scientific magic tests           (GC:6)






Ace       




Military Jargon for pilot
killing 10 or more enemy craft    (GC:1)






acute sense of danger  




A not entirely explainable
psionic ability of Roy Masters and all Greenies to sense imminent danger



               


Adam Smith      




Pseudonym of professional killer
sent to Corri-Door by SII to kill a Kermac Agent              






Adam the first  




First Immortal - Not part of the
200 - 12,000 Years Old     (GC:1)






Admiral
"Wild" Bill Strother
,    




See Strother, W. Admiral              (GC:6)






Admiral Mc Elligott        




One of the 200 Immortals. Chosen
to be “the Administrator” by the Guardian, is the Admiral of the Fleet since
2100 and will remain Admiral of the Fleet indefinitely unless recalled and
retired by the Union Assembly or by resigning. ( Immortal Lead Act of 2112).
Was Born iN Scotland Earth before the ascent and Admiral in the Royal British
Navy (Submariner)   (GC:2)






Admiral of the Fleet      




Highest Military Rank in the
Union Fleet. Five Star Admiral, Currently held by Obrok McElligott    (GC:2)






Admiral Richard Stahl   




One of the 200 Immortals. Chosen
to be “The Warrior”. Perhaps the most famous of all the Immortals. No other
Immortal is as respected and beloved by Union Citizens and no other is as
famous and feared by the enemies of the Union. Fought in every conflict and war
since 2080, and always personally and at the front. Honorary Commandant of the
United Stars Marine Corps. After the Piostla war an anti war hysteria ( Kermac
Psi Subversive Attack) swept the Assembly and Stahl was not only dismissed but
, stripped of all rank and sentenced to death. Death sentence was commuted into
a sentence of exile. Stahl disappears from History and public eyes. During the
Battle of Saran when the Y’All were about to win and destroy the Union and eradicate
Saran and Earth. Stahl reappears with a huge Alien battle ship and a new alien
weapon. The Alien ship and the new weapon turns the tide and the Union is safe
and wins the war against the Y’All. Stahl is restored to the second in Command
of the fleet and First in Command over the Union Marines. Stahl insists on the
Immortal responsibility act. A law that requires the Assembly each year to
discuss the performance and conduct of the Immortals in power. (GC:1)






Admiral Strother             




Flag Officer, Commandant of all
Union forces in the Coreward Sector      (GC:6)






Admiral Webb Stokes  




Current commandant of the United
Stars of the Galaxy Space Naval Academy. Webb Stokes is an Ult     (GC:6)






Adolph's Firstborn         




First born son of the Lindbergh
clan. He  dies, suffocating in his
Hunting Sub as a result of a tech stop attack. He and his crew are the  first known victims of the Nilfeheim Second
Clan war Crisis         (GC:5)






Aera Denial Drone         




Military family of devices :
Robotic Mine. Denies Access to an area, or makes it difficult and thus slowing
advance                 (GC:4)






Afghanistan or Iraq
wars             




Series of local wars on Terra
before the Ascent. Short outbreak of hositilities by extemists after the Aliens
arrive                (GC1)






aft shield generators
   




Aft = Rear.  Usually Space ships have several Defensive
shield generators. Unless they are contour hugging shields they are usually
sphere shaped around the ship and there are at least six shield generators even
in the smallest ship : Keel (down) Top (up), Bow (front), Aft (back), starboard
(right), port side (left). Most Shields require enormous amounts of energy and
are usually the most power consuming systems aboard a star ship. Captains may
order specific power distribution, to conserve energy in other areas or to
strengthen shields in a particular direction. To have the ability to distribute
power to the most needed side is the reason to have segmented Shield generators
instead of one for the entire ship.      (GC:6)






AG lifters           




General Term for Artificial
Gravitation Devices providing Lift to flyers and gliders, AG lifters can also
be found in Elevators, Belts and similar devices               (GC:5)






Agra Bot              




Autonomous Intelligent but not
sentient machine purpose built for agricultural purposes.            (GC:6)






Agra Bot technician       




Individual engaged with the
operation and mainenance of Agricultural Robots. Highly sought after profession    (GC:6)






Agra Marine Products   




Harvested or farmed products
from a Water planet         (GC:6)






Agra product
freighter 




Specialized Transport ship to
convey Argricultural Products from one Planet to the other. While most General
freighters can take on virtually any from of freight. Specialized Agri
Freighters often are equipped to handle and transport life stock more
efficently.           (GC:5)






Agresso Level   




Xeno sociolgy term to describe
the readiness to aggressive behavior in a species as whole. Terrans classify
themselves as AL 2 while all others classify Terrans as AL 10 . The Term and
the Classificaton is often criticized and not accepted by Union Fleet science.    (GC:3)






Agro product Purchaser




Individual engaged in the
activitiy of purchasing Agricultural products from independend producers        (GC:9)






Agurus, USS      




Special Purpose ship of NAVINT
(Navy Intelligence)         (GC:9)






AI           




Abreviation for Artificial
Intelligence. Almost all Compuronics in Union use are AI but not SA (Self
aware.               (GC:2)






Aikido  




Ancient Terran form of Martial
Arts. Eric becomes a grand master             (GC:7)






air dried squid




Snack Food favorite of Eric           (GC:6)






Air rifle




projectile weapon using
compressed air to accellerate and expell projectile.       (GC:6)






Airlock 


An airlock is a device which permits the passage of people
and objects between a pressure vessel and its surroundings while minimizing the
change of pressure in the vessel and loss of air from it. The lock consists of
a small chamber with two airtight doors in series which do not open
simultaneously. An airlock may be used for passage between environments of
different gases rather than different pressures, to minimize or prevent the
gases from mixing.




(GC:1)




Tuesday 5 April 2011

Edengrave 2011-04-04 . chapter 40

Edengrave 2011-04-04 .
chapter 40

What an extraordinary effort.

I am utterly
exhausted, it's 4 am, couldn't sleep, couldn't stop reading, and I have work
tomorrow. Just couldn't let go. this is extraordinary well rounded, and polished
enough for publishing in my opinion. I am glad I stumbled on this story. I was
desperate for something new to read, and couldn't find something fresh in the
kindle store, so as I was haunting for a gold nugget, I remembered the old
fictionpress and decided to try there. as usual you have to spend quite a lot of
time separating the wheat from the shaft, but from time to time, a nugget of
gold emerge, and today I hit the mother-lode. :)
A coming of age story, in a
futuristic universe, with spaceships, psionics and all my favorites themes
check. well written...check. interesting characters. check. very well
constructed universe check. fresh. triple check. long... check. you simply hit
all the right notes.
So I started reading, and I have just now emerged. I've
just now moved all your work to my kindle so I can read from wherever, and will
now read from there. btw you know you can publish on the kindle store as an
indie don't you. this is better than most indie books, and would stand a very
good chance to be published I think. moreover your writing will get more
audience. Fictionpress sees very little traffic really, although it's a great
website.
Really gotta run and catch some sleep. I'll probably be late from
work as it is, but it was worth it. thank you very much for the great time I
spent lost in your universe.

Saturday 19 March 2011

The Milky Way Galaxy in the Year 5012

This is a Map, a visual aide to the Galactic Chronicles

Readers from all over the World

Fiction Press where the Galactic Chronicles stories are posted has a traffic page, shwoing how many readers a story gets. Most amazing to me is the Reader by country break down.
To have readers as far as New Zealand is a humbling and pride realization at the same time!
Readers from:
USA
UK
Australia
Canada
Denmark
New Zealand
Ireland
Singapore
Slovania
Poland
France
Netherlands
Germany
Belgium
Portugal
Ukraine
South Africa
Argentina
Romania
Taiwan
A big thank you to you all!
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Friday 18 March 2011

Galactic Chronicles - Authors Blog

This blog is about my Science Fiction saga : Galactic Chronicles. Several books of the series can be read at: http://www.fictionpress.com/u/539273/Vanessa_Ravencroft
I love reading Sci Fi and always wanted to write and create my own.
My stories all occur in the same Universe. The background, Aliens, support
characters will always be the same. The Worlds, the times and the main
characters change. You do not have to read my stories in any particular sequence
as they all self contained and hopefully make sense without having read any of
the other books.

This Blog was created by so I can inform my readers about news and developments.
The Review and comment section is not the best format for that.